Advantages and disadvantages of telling your story in third person
Imagine for a moment having the powers of a god: seeing every thought, every hidden motivation, and every secret of your characters. Simultaneously observing what happens in different rooms, cities, or even time periods. This is the fascinating power that narrating in third person grants you. But like all great power, it comes with great responsibilities. In this journey, we’ll explore the multiple dimensions of this narrative resource that has shaped some of the most impactful masterpieces in literature and comics, revealing both its strengths and its dangerous pitfalls.
The omniscient architect: The narrator who sees all, knows all
Among third-person narrators, the omniscient one reigns as the most powerful and versatile. We should conceive it as a narrative entity with unlimited knowledge: it’s the one who possesses the most intimate secrets of each character, their hidden thoughts, their past stories, and their deepest motivations. This narrator can describe environments and settings with millimetric precision, from the textures of a landscape to the smells that permeate a room, with an accuracy impossible for a first-person narrator.
The metaphor of the omniscient narrator as a literary deity is not coincidental. This figure rises above the fictional world, not as just another character inhabiting that universe, but as a superior consciousness that encompasses everything. Unlike the protagonist or witness narrator (who are limited by their own subjective perception), the omniscient narrator transcends these restrictions. This fundamental characteristic allows it to move freely between scenes, characters, and times, offering a panoramic perspective that no individual character could provide.
The tradition of the omniscient narrator has deep roots in the history of literature and has been masterfully transferred to the world of comics and graphic novels. Think of works like “Watchmen” by Alan Moore and Dave Gibbons, where the narrator allows us to access multiple perspectives, or “Maus” by Art Spiegelman, where different timelines intertwine. In both cases, the omniscient voice acts as an orchestra conductor harmonizing the various melodies of a complex composition.
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The weaver of complex tapestries: When the story demands breadth
The true magic of the omniscient narrator is revealed when facing stories of great complexity. Unlike the limited and subjective vision offered by a first-person narrator, omniscience provides us with an expansive canvas where we can paint with all available colors.
Imagine a story with dozens of significant characters, each with their own trajectory, motivations, and personal history. Now add multiple settings that span different places, perhaps even different time periods. Finally, incorporate plots and subplots that intertwine like the threads of an intricate tapestry. A first-person narration would be overwhelmed by such complexity, but the omniscient narrator thrives in this territory.
This characteristic explains why great literary sagas and extensive graphic series often opt for this type of narration. Works like Neil Gaiman’s “Sandman,” with its vast universe of characters and realities, or Brian Azzarello and Eduardo Risso’s “100 Bullets,” with its intricate network of conspiracies, leverage omniscience to effectively manage their complex narrative structures.
Omniscience also allows the creator to play with dramatic contrast – showing what one character knows versus what another ignores, or what the reader knows versus what the characters don’t know. This resource, known as dramatic irony, generates tension and expectation. Think about how it works in superhero comics: the reader knows the protagonist’s secret identity while watching other characters interact with them without this crucial knowledge.
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The art of selection: When less is more
While the omniscient narrator has the power to tell everything, true mastery lies in knowing what to show and what to hide. Here’s one of the most fascinating paradoxes of the omniscient narrator: having unlimited access to information, its effectiveness depends precisely on exercising moderation.
The temptation is understandable. With the ability to describe every physical detail, every fleeting thought, and every emotional nuance, the creator may feel obligated to use all these possibilities. However, this leads to one of the most common dangers: information overload.
When we bombard the reader with excessive descriptions, exhaustive psychological analyses, and constant exposition, we not only slow down the narrative pace but also stifle the reader’s active participation. Effective narrative, both in literature and comics, functions as a dance between what is expressed and what is suggested. The author proposes, but it’s in the reader’s mind where the story fully comes to life.
This descriptive oversaturation is particularly problematic in the medium of comics, where narrative economy is crucial. An overly verbose omniscient narrator can conflict with the inherently visual nature of the medium. As Will Eisner, a pioneer of graphic narrative, pointed out, comics work best when they allow images to “breathe” and tell part of the story by themselves.
Great comic masters like Moebius, Craig Thompson, or Junji Ito demonstrate that narrative omniscience can manifest subtly through visual decisions: a change in framing, a transition between panels, or a play of light and shadow can communicate crucial information without the need for extensive textual explanations.
Hemingway’s iceberg principle is equally applicable to graphic narration: what is visible should suggest the presence of a much larger submerged mass. This narrative economy doesn’t impoverish the story but enriches it, inviting the reader to fill in the blanks with their own imagination. Click here to discover how to balance the explicit and implicit in your visual narratives.
Emotional distance: The challenge of intimate connection
One of the most frequent criticisms of the omniscient narrator is its tendency to create emotional distance. By floating above the characters, observing them from an elevated perspective, it can be more difficult to generate that intimate and visceral connection that often naturally arises with first-person narration.
This distance is not necessarily negative – it may be exactly what certain stories require. An epic tale with complex political, social, or philosophical dimensions can benefit from this broader and less personal perspective. Think of Marjane Satrapi’s “Persepolis” or Joe Sacco’s “Palestine,” works where the omniscient perspective allows individual experiences to be contextualized within broader historical and social frameworks.
However, when we seek to immerse ourselves in a character’s subjective experience, create deep empathy, or intensely explore their psychology, the omniscient narrator can present obstacles. The solution doesn’t necessarily consist of abandoning the third person, but in employing techniques that reduce this distance.
An effective strategy is the selective or limited omniscient narrator, which maintains the third-person perspective but predominantly adheres to the experience of a specific character. This approach, masterfully used by authors like Jane Austen in literature or Jeff Lemire in comics, combines the advantages of omniscience with greater emotional depth.
In the visual realm, artists can compensate for this distance through stylistic decisions that subjectively bring us closer to the characters: the use of first-person perspectives, expressionist distortions that reflect emotional states, or page design that simulates mental processes. David Mazzucchelli in “Asterios Polyp” or Dave McKean in his collaborations with Neil Gaiman brilliantly exemplify these techniques.
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The balance between showing and telling: The narrative dance
One of the most repeated mantras in creative writing workshops is “show, don’t tell.” This maxim takes on particular nuances when working with an omniscient narrator, especially in the context of graphic narrative.
The omniscient narrator, by its explanatory nature, tends to “tell” more than “show.” It can directly describe a character’s thoughts instead of revealing them through actions; it can explain the significance of an event instead of allowing the reader to deduce it. This tendency, when taken to the extreme, can result in a didactic narrative that underestimates the reader’s intelligence.
In comics, where text and image converge, this balance takes on fascinating dimensions. The image is already “showing,” so an omniscient narrator that also “tells” what we already see can be redundant. Think of the famous opening sequence of “Watchmen,” where the panels show us a zoom out from a pool of blood on the sidewalk to an entire building, while the text from Rorschach’s journal provides a philosophical context that complements, without duplicating, what we see.
Frank Miller in “Sin City” or Craig Thompson in “Blankets” demonstrate how the omniscient voice can add additional layers of meaning without taking away from the visual narrative. In these cases, text and image establish a symbiotic relationship where each element does what it does best: images communicate action, atmosphere, and immediate emotion, while text provides context, introspection, or counterpoint.
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Temporal flexibility: Master of narrative time
One of the most powerful advantages of the omniscient narrator is its supreme flexibility to manipulate narrative time. Unlike a first-person narrator, who is anchored to their own temporal experience, the omniscient narrator can move freely between past, present, and future.
This temporal freedom allows for creating complex narrative structures: prolepsis (anticipations), analepsis (retrospections), ellipses, and temporal dilations that would be difficult or artificial from a limited perspective. Think of works like Chris Ware’s “Jimmy Corrigan, The Smartest Kid on Earth,” where the narrative jumps between generations and eras with a fluidity that only omniscience allows.
For comic creators, this temporal flexibility offers extraordinary visual possibilities. The page becomes a space where different times can coexist simultaneously. A character can walk through panels representing different eras; a single page can contain an entire lifetime. Artists like Richard McGuire in “Here” or Francis Manapul in his work on “The Flash” have explored these possibilities in innovative ways.
Temporal manipulation also allows for playing with narrative tension in unique ways. The omniscient narrator can advance future consequences, generating expectation, or progressively reveal past events that shed new light on the present. This handling of time not only enriches the narrative structure but allows for exploring themes such as memory, causality, or destiny with greater depth.
In the visual realm, the representation of different temporalities can manifest through differentiated drawing styles, specific color palettes for each era, or page designs that break with traditional linearity. Mastering these techniques provides the artist with invaluable tools for building complex and multidimensional narratives.
Control of narrative rhythm: The orchestra conductor
The omniscient narrator functions as an orchestra conductor who meticulously controls the tempo of the story. It can accelerate the narrative rhythm by summarizing events that don’t require detailed attention, or decelerate to minutely examine crucial moments.
This capability is particularly valuable for managing stories with multiple narrative lines. The narrator can alternate between these plots, dedicating to each the space that its relative importance requires. It can simultaneously maintain the thread of various subplots, reminding the reader of relevant elements without the narrative structure collapsing.
In comics, this rhythm control manifests not only through text but through visual decisions: the size and distribution of panels, the spaces between them, the density of information on each page. Artists like Winsor McCay, a pioneer with “Little Nemo in Slumberland,” or contemporaries like Brian K. Vaughan and Fiona Staples in “Saga” master this orchestration of visual rhythm.
The modulation of rhythm also allows for manipulating the reader’s subjective perception of time. An action sequence can be accelerated through small and dynamic panels, while a moment of contemplation can be expanded through broader and more detailed compositions. This control over the reader’s temporal experience is an extraordinarily powerful narrative tool.
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Building complex worlds: The universal creator
The omniscient narrator is unsurpassed when it comes to building extensive and detailed fictional worlds. Its ability to provide contextual information, describe complete social systems, and explain the functioning of alternative universes makes it the perfect ally for genres such as fantasy, science fiction, or historical uchronias.
This aspect is especially relevant in comics, a medium that has given life to some of the most elaborate and enduring fictional universes in contemporary culture. From the multiverses of Marvel and DC to original constructions like the post-apocalyptic world of “The Walking Dead” or the reimagined feudal Japan in “Usagi Yojimbo,” the omniscient narrator facilitates the gradual introduction of worldbuilding elements without interrupting the narrative flow.
World-building is not limited to physical or geographical aspects but encompasses cultural, political, religious, and social systems. The omniscient narrator can contextualize these elements, explain them when necessary, and show how they affect the characters without the need for long expository dialogues that would seem artificial.
In the visual realm, this world-building manifests through the design of settings, costumes, architecture, and other visual elements that communicate information about the fictional universe. Artists like Moebius, Katsuhiro Otomo, or Benoît Peeters and François Schuiten have demonstrated how illustration can transmit complex information about imaginary worlds without relying excessively on text.
Contemporary artists and writers face the challenge of creating visually distinctive and coherent universes that resonate with today’s audience. From the integration of futuristic technologies to the recreation of historical periods, the convincing visualization of these worlds requires research, imagination, and technical mastery.
The art of multiple perspective: Beyond a single view
One of the most sophisticated capabilities of the omniscient narrator is the possibility of presenting multiple perspectives on the same events or characters. Unlike first-person narration, inevitably tinted by a singular subjectivity, omniscience allows for examining reality from various angles.
This multiplicity of perspectives is invaluable for exploring morally ambiguous themes or complex situations where no single truth exists. Think of works like Akira Kurosawa’s “Rashomon” (based on stories by Ryūnosuke Akutagawa), where the same event is narrated from different points of view, revealing how each perspective is conditioned by interests, prejudices, or perceptual limitations.
In comics, this technique has been brilliantly explored by authors like Alan Moore in “Promethea” or Grant Morrison in “The Invisibles,” where alternative realities or radically different perceptions coexist and interrelate. The visual nature of the medium allows for representing these divergent perspectives through differentiated graphic styles, contrasting compositions, or distinctive color palettes.
The juxtaposition of multiple perspectives not only enriches narrative complexity but invites the reader to more active participation, evaluating for themselves the relative validity of each vision. This polyphonic approach more faithfully reflects the kaleidoscopic nature of human experience than monolithic narratives constructed from a single perspective.
For the illustrator or comic artist, the challenge consists of developing a visual vocabulary versatile enough to represent these divergent perspectives while maintaining the general stylistic coherence of the work. Artists like Dave McKean, Bill Sienkiewicz, or J.H. Williams III have stood out for their ability to radically modulate their visual style according to narrative needs.
The omniscient conclusion: Final reflections on the all-powerful narrator
Throughout this journey, we’ve explored the multiple dimensions of the omniscient narrator, that voice which, like a literary god, soars over the fictional universe with unlimited knowledge. We’ve seen its extraordinary strengths: the ability to encompass complex plots with multiple characters and settings, the flexibility to manipulate narrative time, precise rhythm control, and the possibility of presenting multiple perspectives. We’ve also identified its potential challenges: the temptation to overload us with information, the emotional distance it can create, and the difficulty in balancing showing and telling.
Like any narrative tool, the omniscient narrator is not inherently superior or inferior to other options. Its effectiveness depends on its suitability for the specific story we want to tell. An intimate story of self-discovery may benefit more from the immediacy of the first person, while an epic with complex sociopolitical dimensions will find in omniscience the ideal vehicle.
For creators of comics and graphic novels, the omniscient narrator offers particularly fascinating possibilities due to the interaction between text and image. The narrative voice can complement, contrast, or expand what is shown visually, creating additional layers of meaning impossible in an exclusively textual or visual medium.
The key to harnessing the potential of the omniscient narrator lies in moderation and selectivity. Having access to all knowledge does not imply the obligation to reveal everything. Masters of this narrative approach know when to provide detailed information and when to withdraw to let the story breathe on its own, when to explain and when to suggest, when to broaden the perspective and when to focus it.
Ultimately, the omniscient narrator reminds us that storytelling is an act of balance and orchestration where each element must serve the greater purpose of the narrative. By mastering this powerful resource, we join a tradition that extends from ancient epic narrators to contemporary innovators of comics and graphic novels, all of them exploring the infinite potential of the voice that knows all, sees all, and tells all… but only when necessary.


